Some assistance for the Sanders essay you’re all so excited to write this weekend.
The prompt is here (on page 9) in the event any of you have misplaced it.
Two sample first draft paragraphs are located below:
Sample #1
Sanders opens (paragraph 1) by analyzing our infatuation with migration, subtly emphasizing our carelessness. He describes us as being “familiar” with “restless moving,” which shows us that migration has become a habit, something we are accustomed to. Sanders uses asyndeton to emphasize our start as “sailors, explorers, cowboys” changing into simple “rainbow-chasers” and “vagabonds;” we have become unoriginal and uninteresting. He criticizes our inability to shake off the “romance of unlimited space,” saying that we can truly never be satisfied nor can we understand the implications of our actions. “Our Promised Land” is a biblical reference furthering Sanders’s argument that Americans move on too quickly and they cannot fully appreciate the beauty of staying put, continually striving to be the best and rise over everyone. Never being truly satisfied, we continue leave behind us a wreckage of what was once new. According to Sanders, we are a “populace drunk on driving” and we are unable to fix what we have destroyed; we simply pack up and move away. Sanders describes taking advantage as a “myth,” a “game,” “romance,” and “seductive,” implying our movement lets us believe migration is the only way to preserve our virtues when in reality, movement destroys all that we should hold dear. Sanders’s tone seems light and almost playful; however,there is underlying accusation as he analyzes our obsession with finding and owning the next best thing. It is with this attitude that Sanders expresses his concerns about migration.
Sample #2
Sanders argues (paragraph 1) that Americans, fearful of stagnation, are consumed with migration. From the very beginning of the essay, Sanders makes it clear that he doesn’t take those infatuated with movement seriously. He shifts from describing migrators as “explorers” to “rainbow-chasers” to show that he feels that these people are ridiculous and wrongly put on a pedestal. Sanders also refers to American migration as “romance of unlimited space”, suggesting that the so-called “explorers” are unrealistic. He points out how the obsession with exploring is more dangerous than romantic, as people constantly “wear out” the land they inhabit before moving on to the next plot of space. People associate movement with reinvention, a way of ending a “played-out game.” Sanders shows that people are so infatuated with changing themselves that they will change everything about their surroundings, even destroy them, in order to get the effect they desire. In a short sentence that contrasts with his previous long-winded sentences, he reveals that Americans view migration with such intensity that they believe that they will “die” if they stand still. He calls the American population “drunk on driving,” associating movement with extremely reckless, thoughtless behavior. In addition, Sanders constantly refers to migration as a “myth”, completely disregarding the opposing side. In this paragraph, he completely makes the argument advocating for migration irrelevant.
