Your revisions for your welfare essay will be due in class on Thursday, October 4. Please make sure that you have highlighted/bolded all changes, included the checklist, and stapled all three parts together for class.
Some additional resources to use:
- Revision Checklist
- Topic Sentence and Thesis cheat sheet
- Naysayers
- General Persuasive Writing Handout
- The Comma
Make sure that your revisions reflect careful work that has been proofread and reviewed carefully.