The revisions for the Carson Analysis essay will be due on Monday or Tuesday, depending on when you get the essay back. Those of you who receive it on Thursday should expect to turn yours in on Monday and those who receive it on Friday will be expected to turn it in on Tuesday.
As always, your revision should be printed to give me in class and include the following:
- the new draft
- the first draft
- the checklist for revision
You can begin work on your revision as soon as this evening, as the revision guide is available now. One additional resource you’ll want to consult for this revision is the CRISPING handout, as sentence combining and sharp sentences were consistent problems for many of these essays.
You might also want to read over the Frank N. Stein version of the Carson essay.
