Essay 1: Media Violence Revisions

Our normal pattern will be to have revisions due two days after my corrections have been completed, but we’re going to use a different approach for this first one. Your revision will be due Sunday at 1:00 p.m., and submitted using Google Docs again.

This week, we’ll spend a portion of each day going over a mini-lesson teaching and/or reviewing some strategies to improve your essays. Look here by Sunday night for some general comments about the pieces as well.

Monday: General Tips and the importance of edge
Tuesday: Thesis and topic sentence review
Wednesday: Naysayers
Thursday: Introductions Review
Friday: Q and A