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Archive for year: 2008
Things That I Do Not Ever Want to See in Essays
1. The word “relatable.” I don’t care what dictionary you found it in; I refuse to believe that it is a real word.
2. The phrase “a prime example of…”
Sample for the Morally Ambiguous Character Essay
Thesis: Though Beowulf posesses many of the virtues of Anglo-Saxon culture, his final acts call into question the very values he exemplifies.
Topic Sentence 1: In many ways, Beowulf’s character is an exemplar for the values of his people.
Topic Sentence 2: Despite upholding these values of courage and strength, Beowulf’s downfall demonstrates the potential dangers of pride.
Topic Sentence 3: The tension between Beowulf’s greatness and the depth of the fall of the Geats calls into question the values that they (and he) admire.
The Antigone essays are done. They are all posted here, so you can download your comments and grades. Revisions are due in class on Thursday.
Here are some resources for writing your English III persuasive essay paper: